This poetry reminded me of the writing of Kahlil Gibran - it's beautiful!
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Showing posts with label Poetry. Show all posts
Wednesday, April 2, 2008
Wednesday, December 19, 2007
2nd Place

Ds#4 won 2nd place in the library's poetry contest for Kindergarden. The theme this year was "If I could go anywhere..." In the K-12th competition, there were 900 entries submitted this year. I think all the kids did a great job!!
Ds#4 had all the ideas, I looked up words in our Rhyming Dictionary (I've LOVED that thing!) and suggested them to him, and he came up with the line. I did help him with meter and syllabication, but the rest was all him.
People have asked him what a canimal is. He made it up when he didn't like the words available to rhyme with animal. He described it to me and submitted a picture of one with his poem.
Rescuing Animals
If I could go anywhere, I’d rescue an animal.
I like them a lot,
but I’ve never heard of a canimal.
I would rescue a baby elephant
when it gets lost
Or a baby lizard
stuck in applesauce.
A baby dolphin
bit by a shark
Or a beaver’s dam
made of bark
A baby alligator
without a dad
He ran away
and made his mom mad.
If I ever found
a yellow striped canimal
I’d rescue it too,
because it’s an animal.
Monday, November 6, 2006
Poetry procrastination
All the kids wrote poems for the library's poetry contest. I didn't turn them in on time. Bad Mama, bad mama!
Who Are Your Friends At the Library?
By DD #1, Age 10
Who are your friends at the library, library?
Are they young or old, new and bold?
Who are your friends at the library, library?
The books are my friends at the library, library.
They are warm and cold and cannot be betrayed for gold.
The books are my friends at the library, library.
How can books be your friends at the library, library?
They cannot talk, they cannot walk.
How can books be your friends at the library, library?
The books are my friends at the library, library.
Any person they can outtalk.
They may not walk, but they can fly like a hawk.
The books are my friends at the library, library.
October, 2006
I Love My Library
By Dd #2, Age 8
You can go anywhere
Or anyplace,
My mom just loves it
Seeing my face,
Laughing so hard
That I fall off my chair,
Crying so much
That I float up into the air.
You can read about science
Or geography
That’s why I love
My Library.
October, 2006
The Book : Lost and Found
by Ds #1, age 6
There is a book
A hook grabbed the book
The cook read the book
He had the hook
The cook liked the book
A crook stole the book
He hid it in a nook
The crook read the book
The police caught the crook
The cook found the book
The hiding place was the nook
The library was the nook
October, 2006
Who Are Your Friends At the Library?
By DD #1, Age 10
Who are your friends at the library, library?
Are they young or old, new and bold?
Who are your friends at the library, library?
The books are my friends at the library, library.
They are warm and cold and cannot be betrayed for gold.
The books are my friends at the library, library.
How can books be your friends at the library, library?
They cannot talk, they cannot walk.
How can books be your friends at the library, library?
The books are my friends at the library, library.
Any person they can outtalk.
They may not walk, but they can fly like a hawk.
The books are my friends at the library, library.
October, 2006
I Love My Library
By Dd #2, Age 8
You can go anywhere
Or anyplace,
My mom just loves it
Seeing my face,
Laughing so hard
That I fall off my chair,
Crying so much
That I float up into the air.
You can read about science
Or geography
That’s why I love
My Library.
October, 2006
The Book : Lost and Found
by Ds #1, age 6
There is a book
A hook grabbed the book
The cook read the book
He had the hook
The cook liked the book
A crook stole the book
He hid it in a nook
The crook read the book
The police caught the crook
The cook found the book
The hiding place was the nook
The library was the nook
October, 2006
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